Books

17 January, 2011

“Torment” Book Review

“Torment” by Lauren Kate Release Date: Out now! Genre: Paranormal Romance Publisher: Doubleday Children’s (Random House) I started off my original review of “Fallen” by gushing about how much I loved its cover. The sequel, “Torment”, doesn’t disappoint either – it keeps to the same gothic, monochrome colour scheme. Both covers avoid showing the girl’s face, and the hands in her hair hint at some of the confusion and worries that will be a key part of the story. There’s an excellent video on how covers like this are created here, showing 6 hours of work cut down into a 2 minute video. Here’s the cover blurb this time round:

LOVE NEVER DIES… It took Lucinda an eternity to find her beloved angel, Daniel. But he waited for her. Now they are forced apart again, to protect Luce from the Outcasts – immortals who want her dead. During their separation, Luce learns about her mysterious past lives. But the more she discovers, the more she suspects that Daniel is hiding something. What if Daniel’s version of the past isn’t true? Is it really their destiny to be together? Or is Luce really meant to be with someone else?

Lucinda Price returns as our protagonist, and we join her as she’s being sent to a new private school after the horrors she went up against in “Fallen”. Daniel demands that she stays in her new school for 18 days without any contact with him. Luce can barely stand the idea of them being apart, but what bothers her more is the nagging feeling that Daniel’s hiding something. Something involving strangers coming after her if she ever leaves the school, involving Daniel killing to protect her, and involving a truce that has Daniel working together with Cam, the creepy demon who nearly killed Luce before.

I know what you’re thinking. A girl whining about being separated from her boyfriend for a measly 18 days, ugh. I groaned as well, but after giving it some consideration and thinking back to my young-and-stupidly-lovestruck days, I probably would have been a bit unhappy too. Let’s not kid ourselves here, young people are dramatic through-and-through.

That’s where Lauren Kate excels – she captures that age group perfectly, from the desperation of my-world-revolves-around-you first loves to the vicious mood swings and irrationality that happen when you’re a confused teenage girl. (Especially if you’re a confused teenage girl who’s boyfriend it being a bit of a prick, and keeping you locked up ‘for your own safety’ without telling you why.)

“Torment” is a novel about Luce, following her as she grows a lot more independent, stronger and forms her own ideas about what it takes to have a healthy relationship. She’s wildly reckless, too – frustratingly so, as she ignores warnings from others along the lines of ‘don’t leave the school it’s dangerous’ because of course it’s not that dangerous. Of course.

It doesn’t let down on the action side either, though. The first few opening chapters, which nicely recap “Fallen” for the short of memory but don’t cover it enough for anyone who’s thinking of reading “Torment” without reading the first book, start off at a relaxed pace as Lauren builds up some impressive new settings and a new cast of characters. Before long, though, the suspense starts shooting up and the story gets a welcome injection of paranormal adventure and danger.

Another area Lauren is brilliant at is scenery descriptions – we go from the gothic graveyards and reform schools of “Fallen” to sunny California, with a schools on cliff-side, yachts of bright blue oceans, beach party bonfires and road trips across the land.

She’s still a great creator of a varied cast as well – I particularly like the way there’s no clear signs whether a member of the cast is or isn’t trustworthy, and after the end of “Fallen” it’s impossible to tell if any of them are going to survive the story.

I was slightly let down by the end, though – “Fallen” pulled out a powerful twist with Penn, but the twist in “Torment” felt too obvious right the way through and I was disappointed when it didn’t turn out to be a red herring. The actual resolution of the finale did come as a surprise, though.

The book’s definitely a huge improvement on the writing in “Fallen” – I wish it had answered a few more questions, but I’m hoping the third book “Passion” will resolve a lot of my nagging questions when it’s released.

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Other Books By This Author: Fallen, The Betrayal of Natalie Hargrove.
For Fans of: Stephenie Meyer’s “Twilight”, P.C. Cast’s “The House of Night”, Becca Fitzpatrick’s “Hush, Hush”

A copy of “Torment” was provided for this review by Random House.

I also have a review of Lauren Kate’s first novel, “The Betrayal of Natalie Hargrove“

28 June, 2010

What I’ve Been Up To

Time for another one of those posts where I go over everything that’s been sucking up my time.

I haven’t had much time to listen to music because I’ve managed to lose my beloved headphones (Sennheiser CX-300s) and I’m far too stubborn to buy new ones. I’ll find them! Somewhere. Been going over some “Rise Against” tracks though, I’d forgotten that I liked them.

As for movies, I watched Breakfast At Tiffany’s. It’s a simple enough story, but it’s an endearing 60s movies. True to the novella with a few exceptions, most noticeably the end. However, it feels over-hyped, and in this day and age the ‘yellowface’ make-up used to make the Caucasian actor playing Mr. Yunioshi look Japanese is irritating at best.

Also, this month I managed to not only play a video game, but complete it! I usually get frustrated or distracted before the end of anything. That game was Portal, which I already knew and loved but hadn’t actually gotten round to finishing yet. I did, using the free copy from Steam’s giveaway a month or so ago. It was brilliant! There’s also a lot of suspense in it which had me on edge towards the end because I’m a scaredy cat.

As for books, I’m just finished The Girl With The Dragon Tattoo. It’s very slow to start, but after the first 100 pages or so it gets interesting. But very… well, explicit is the only word. There were a few scenes with the female main character Salander that made me uncomfortable. Violence towards woman is a huge theme, so be warned. There’s also a lot of paragraphs spent on the protagonist getting with every woman he meets, but that’s just a bit boring.

Aside from that though, it was a decent read. A few nice twists to the story, and while I wasn’t much bothered about all the information on industrial reporting some of the sections describing Sweden’s legal guardianship system were food for thought. I won’t be rushing out to buy the other books in the trilogy. 2/5 – an okay book, but there’s a lot of little nickpicks about characterization and plot that don’t feel quite satisfying. Not to mention the need for a bit tighter editing, especially at the beginning. Not my kind of book, really.

30 May, 2010

Holidays and Rain

This week I received my orders of an XL black and white ink cartridge, a massive box of 2500 sheets of printer paper and a box folder. I’d say these are simple pleasures, but they’re actually quite expensive. :O With my website bills to pay that’ll be my bank account running on empty for the month.

I’ve been quite busy! In case you haven’t guessed by the geeky supplies above, writing is still going a-ok. Been getting a few opinions on the first part of the story which is providing some fun fuel for improvements and future plans.

Aside from that, the house has been noisy with the other half’s DIY. Dave’s gotten ahold of a drill and has been improving everything, adding new catches to every door, putting up blinds and jigsawing out the bottom of one of my desks (I have two in the same room, and love it), drilling down wood over any entrance points that might be used by spiders…the house is looking all the better for the improvements. Not to mention there’s a huge mirror waiting to go in the living room which will take at least two people to lift.

He rearranged my pens and pencils when doing this, though. … I wasn’t best pleased. :P

Other than that I’m just huddling up in my big rainy day fleece-lined hoodie, because it’s pouring rain outside and I feel the cold too easily.

I’ve also been…

Reading Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell, a alternative history fantasy novel set in 1800s England. This is a huge book, and I was put off from reading it for a while because it has a really slow start. I took it in to work and got started, though, and about a third of the way in the plot was unfolding at a good pace, and by the last part I was hooked and desperate to find out how it ended. An absolutely charming novel, with patriotism flowing through it and a historical and magical lore so in-depth that I found myself wondering if all the footnotes were from real novels. If you’re into old-fashioned fantasy or historical writing, you’ll love it.

Playing Final Fantasy 13/XIII. Another slow start, it begins with a tight hold of your hand and 20 hours later (about half-way through according to the quoted 40 hours gameplay) it’s still reluctant to let go. A brilliant storyline and fantastic environments and graphics make it all worth it, though, and now that characters are becoming more likable I’m more than willing to keep hammering the ‘A’ button just to see more. It completely sucks you in.

Watching Doctor Who – Cold Blood, which was a bit depressing but an okay episode. The first part was a messy affair and I’m not sure the second part was good enough to save it – the overuse of voice-overs really didn’t do it any favors. Those final minutes really stole the show, but they didn’t exactly end on a feel-good mood.

Time can be rewritten though, right? Right?

Oh, and being extra-picky: I’m really not a fan of memory erasing plot devices like the Crack in Time. It just leaves too many plot holes – for instance, in the Weeping Angels 2-part episode, shouldn’t some other Clerics have been brought along in place of the ones who were erased? The Bishop isn’t going to take an empty ship. It’s best not to think too hard into sci-fi in general, especially time-travel sci-fi, but still.

The rain also canceled out plans for a BBQ, so we watched The Eurovision Song Contest instead. Which is fine, really, because it allowed me to indulge my sillier music tastes and make comments about it on Twitter throughout. My favorite by far was Turkey’s soft-rock band maNga, who took second place. Winners Germany were okay (the girl was adorable!) but not really to my tastes musically, Greece was dance-y and fun and so was France. Graham Norton’s comments were brilliant – I’m not a huge fan of his, but his commentary was hilarious. Oh, and the UK were infuriatingly awful. I had a bad feeling when I saw Pete Waterman credited as a songwriter, and that gut feeling proved spot on. A trite mess of meaningless, optimistic-sounding lyrics.

Listening to alternative rock band Brand New’s album “Daisy”. I love Brand New, and I’m glad that this album is still as good as I would expect from them. It’s a lot less ‘catchy’ than “The Devil and the God…” and “Deja Entendu”, but that’s mostly due to the layers in each track. They all take multiple listens to even begin to be understood (and a few Google searches for the exact lyrics), but that doesn’t stop them from sounding brilliant. My favorite tracks hands-down is “Gasoline”.

When the army had to hold the line
you were nowhere near the front.
Before the kids could tell the dog goodbye
you were loading up your gun.
I want to know what is the great divide
I want to know what I’ve become.
You’re think that no one else is lonesome
you think that you’re the only one.

That verse in particular has a great rhythm too it, which reminds me faintly of Nine Inch Nails track “Capital G”. The album’s single “At the Bottom” is a bit catchier with an equally strong rhythm to it.

Anyway, I’m off to take it easy in my comfy hoodie and get some work done before bed. I’m loving the long weekend!

13 January, 2010

Best of 2009 – Part 1

I’ve finally started piecing together my highlights of 2009. I’ll be splitting this up into at least 2 blog posts – this one includes best album, movie and book. The next post will include best game, live event, TV Show and webcomic.

Obviously this isn’t an expert link – it’s restricted to only what I’ve seen, heard, read or played and to my own personal tastes. Your milage is going to vary, so leave a comment with your own “Best Of”s, suggestions for what I’ve missed out on, or a link to your own blog posts about it. You no longer have to be a registered site member to comment which should make things easier.

Best Album Of 2009

Biffy Clyro’s “Only Revolutions”

I love Biffy Clyro. A lot. They’re Scottish, they’ve got strong catchy melodies and beautiful lyrics, and since they broke out in the music scene with “Puzzle” they haven’t set a foot wrong. “Only Revolutions” takes things up a notch without compromise, and without losing the style that got them where they are.

Runners Up: Muse “The Resistance”, Placebo “Battle for the Sun”. Brand New’s “Daisy” could also be worth a place here once I give it a good play-through.

Best Movie Of 2009

“Up”

There were a lot of great movies this year, but when it comes to a balance of story-line, style, characters and soundtrack “Up” has to be my choice this year. A heart-string tugging return to brilliance for Pixar.

Runners Up: “Coraline” was a brilliant comeback for traditional claymation, and though “Avatar”s story gets a lot of slack it’s beauty, special effects and skilled use of what’s normally a gimmick have made it a game-changer for movies to come. “District 9” was another close one.

Best Book Of 2009

This wasn’t my best year for reading. I’ve been short of time to get through my own tastes, or any of the critically acclaimed newcomers like “Wolf Hall”. Instead it’s been a stream of stories forced into following the “Twilight” formula.

Not the best quality genre to pick from, but I have to restrict my choices to what I’ve read.

“Hush, Hush”

My favourite new YA of 2009, “Hush, Hush” a smart plot backed up with solid mythology, relatable characters and absolutely brilliant dialogue with sharp innuendo throughout. When other YA books are sticking to the formula Fitzpatrick unashamedly breaks out of the mold with her strong-willed protagonist and far from perfect love interest.

No book is perfect and it does suffer a bit from sledgehammer hints (inserting the words ‘angel’ in at every opportunity while the protagonist spends far too long figuring it out) it doesn’t stop the story from being completely gripping from start to finish. I can’t wait for the sequel.

10 October, 2009

Book Review: Stephen King's "Cujo"

I’m a fairly recent convert to the world of horror writer Stephen King – I picked up “Carrie” about two years ago and loved it absolutely, then picked up “On Writing” and found it fascinating and inspirational. Since then, I’ve come across his books regularly in charity shops, as well as some nice deals in Tescos – all of which have lead to a growing collection.

After “Carrie” and “On Writing”, I read and enjoyed “Misery”. Now was the turn of “Cujo”, the horror story of a beloved family dog that turns rabid and starts terrorising the area, drawing in around a family that have just moved into the area.

Vic Trenton is an advertising designer, and he and his wife Donna move with their four-year-old son Tad from New York to Maine. In Maine, the Camber family – abusive husband Joe, his wife and their son – own a big Saint Bernard named Cujo. Joe Camber has a reputation as a fair-priced and skilled mechanic, and when the Trenton’s car breaks down the two families meet briefly.

Shortly after, Cujo falls into a bolt-hole filled with rabid bats and is bitten. He hasn’t been vaccinated, and his sickness (aided by the suggested possession of the ghost of a murderer who once lived in the town) because a “vortex that draws in everything around it”. Suddenly too smart and far,far too strong, the St.Bernard is now not only easily capable of killing, but driven to do so until nothing is left alive.

This story has a lot of Stephen King staples: being set in Maine (in King’s fictional town ‘Castle Rock’), use of weird and wonderful local accents, a ‘big bad’ evil lurking behind the scenes, characters trapped in a deadly situation, and a very tightly-timed sequence of events that sync up in the run towards the finish.

It also has his enviable skill with characterisation shown in full. Throughout the course of the novel he creates an alcoholic, a scared child, a beaten wife, an adulterer, an animal and more, and each role s played perfectly. one of his tricks for this is to slip into first-person narrative during times of strong emotion. Which would be a bit like if I was just writing as normal, getting on with my review and OH GOD A SPIDER WHAT TO DO WHAT TO DO WHERE IS THE NEAREST MALE AHHHH.

In “On Writing”,” Cujo” was mentioned as the story King “barely remembers writing at all” as he was drinking constantly at the time. Which is an interesting tactic. I wonder if this implies that drunk texts from King are, instead of the usual garbled and emotional mess of most people, the beginnings of epic novellas? I don’t think this method would work for most of us, but if you try it, be sure to leave a comment to let us know – and you get bonus points if you’re still drunk while doing so.

Despite its polished and professional charms, “Cujo” is not without its flaws. Horror stories involve some suspension of disbelief, and when you have a sequence of tightly-timed ‘coincidences’ leading up to your finale, this suspension becomes even more important.

You’re wife’s cheating on you, your business is going down the tubes, and your car has broken down. That’s tough luck, but it happens. Your wifes choice in flings in a psychotic author that trashes your house into a conveniently crime-scene like mess? These things happen, I guess. The garage where you repair your car is not only void of all humanity, but inhabited by a rabid dog and your wife and kid are stuck out there? They’re out of gas? It’s the hottest day of the summer? You’ve called them a dozen times but think you might leave it a few more hours just in case she’s out and besides, if you did call the police they’d be kind of incompetent anyway and take their sweet time about figuring out what’s going in?

Plot-writing involves a good amount of convenient coincidences – that’s an old cliche and a true one. However, writing is also all about sneaking in hints and little events that subtly manipulate the characters and story in the right direction, without giving away to the reader how it’s all going to end.

“Cujo” doesn’t quite have this pegged, and it leaves a lot of the book full of frustratingly unrealistic mistakes by characters, as well as choking up their pacing. The characters are stuck in a inescapable situation, and after the first attempts to save the day fail it just gets boring sitting back and tracking how many times people will mess up until King feels it’s time to wrap the story up.

If you’re looking for a quick-moving read, there are worse books to pick up. Other King novels tackle the flaws in”Cujo” more skillfully, but plenty of other writers come up with much worse. Most importantly, new readers will probably be too distracted by King’s skilled prose to notice its flaws.

“Cujo” is recommended as a decent introduction to Stephen King’s work, as well as a fun look into good characterisation and narration for budding writers. If you’ve been reading King’s stories for a while, however, it’s unlikely to be one of your favorites. 3/5.

1 February, 2009

Review: Anne McCaffrey’s "Dragonflight"

So… Anne McCaffery’s “Dragonriders of Pern”. A famous series, particularly among those interested in

dragons, and one that’s been on my to-do list for a long time – because, as a writer of fantasy (well, cyberpunk) fiction involving dragons, it’s required reading.

I picked up the first book, “Dragonflight”, quite recently – it featured some gorgeous cover art pleasantly reminiscent of the work done on “Dragon Tamers 2: Digital Tempest”, and at first, I really enjoyed it. But in hindsight, there are sections of it that bother me…

It’s hard to explain my impressions of this book – perhaps it’s still too soon after reading it, but I’ll do my best.

‘Dragonflight’ does deserves its place as a fantasy staple – it’s well-written, for the most part, with a detailed world and brilliant effort put into grounding it’s main fantasy element – the dragons, which are all given personality as well as form, with their eating habits to their methods for firebreathing all rendered it satisfying detail.

The time it’s set, however, is not so clear – we’ve got a near-medieval world where important technology has been ‘forgotten’, but with telepathic dragons, extraterrestrial threats and time travel. Executed well, it could have been great – and the time-travel was a nice step up from the slow-moving first half of the book – but it wasnt really touched on, let alone explain, and too much thinking in to the situation tends to unravel the setting piece by piece.

So, where does it go wrong?

It starts with the main female character, Lessa. She starts out fantastic – strong-willed, ambitious, and delightfully dark-natured, and continues lie this, in part, for most of the book. But as it progresses and her relationship with the male protagonist happens, she seems to do a complete u-turn – not only does she let what’s described, in plain words, as rape by him pass with only the odd bit of snark, but she’s left helpless by his constant, rough shaking whenever she does the wrong thing.

She’s lead in a complete u-turn into some meek, abused housewife – and when you loo at Anne’s author bio, where she’s said to have started writing to protest ‘unrealistic portrayals of women’, well…

What.

I’m not a feminist, just smart enough to realise when abuse is clearly portrayed, nor am I a hater. I liked the book, and I’d still recommend the novel to fantasy fans. I’ll even be reading it’s sequels – though partly, this will be in the hope it gets better.

But I’ll be hoping the future protagonists are more of what Lessa should have been….